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The e-books play a more and more important role in our life,especially when the technology of information is making big progress. Under the circumstance that a great number of people prefer to the e-book,some people assume that e-book would replace the traditional book becoming the main book to get information.There are two reasons accounting for this opinion.Fisrtly,e-book is easy to download and enable us to read every time you want.Secondly,e-book costs us less money.We read the book before we purchasing a traditional one and decide whether it worth buying.In a word,people think it can satisfy all we need,so it can take place of tradition book. In my view, e-book actually bring us benefits,but it can not be the total substitute of trandition book.To begin with,some readers are keen on writing when reading in order to get deep insight into the book.In addition,some people are willing to read tranditional book because it can help to establish a quite and concentrating environment.