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Dear Mary, I am so happy to receive your letter of invition, happy birthday to you, but I must tell you somethings about this. I am afraid I can't come to your birthday party. I have too many things to do on Saturday next week. Firstly, I have to come to my after-school pargrams. I can't take Frence leave because I really love this. Secoundly, I have to do my schoolwork. We will have a little exam next week so I must study for the text. Thirdly, I have to clean my room because it's in a mess. I am sorry to write these to you, but I think you will understand. Happy birthday to you, my best friend, hope you will enjoy yourself. Best wish for you yours, Lucy
