句法知识扎实,可适当增加长句的使用;有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分;作者在学术词汇方面要多下功夫,有些单词拼错了。
Recently,with the faster devolpment of society,more and more students pay attention to learning foreign cultrues,as a result,they not like spending much time on learning Chinese. I think there are several reasons for this phenomenon.In one hands, with the using of the Internet,student may be attrated by the foreign cultures and want to learn something that they never know before.Theremore,they will have fun to learn the new things.In another hands, they hold an opinion that,learning Chinese doesn’t meet with the require of the society,and they think Chinese are traditional,which make them boring. So, learning foreign cultures is a good chioce for them to strenthen themselves.Moreover,when they learn foreign cultures,they prefer to have a western festivels,such as Chrismas, Valentine's Day and so on.At the same time,they forget our own festivals, such as Spring Festivals, Mid-Autumn Festival, Qingming Festivals. When we want to change this situation,messures should be given to the study of Chinese.Firstly, the government policies should carried out to make students pay more attention to learn Chinese.Secondly, schools should also attach great importance to the study of Chinese, making it a compulsory curriculum.Finally, college students are, to some extent, forced to study certain foreign languages so as to pass exams or find good jobs so that they could not spare any time to study Chinese. Through these efforts, I think, chances of changing this phenomenon are prosperous.