高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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long long ago,my town with many trees,fish was play in river,the house is so small and the threet sitenosis,people were very poor even they were hard--working.now:there is tall house and big factory ,and many cars are driving in the street,there are just a few trees and no fish.pollution would be soved