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作者词汇基本功不错，建议今后多用学术词汇；可适当增加从句的使用；过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。
It is never to lack of distinguished people who make noble efforts to pursue their ideals in lifelong time and accomplish the ideals at length all around the world. Obviously, everyone who pursuing his dreams makes a difference from one to another, moreover, the difference gives rise to everyone unique personality and makes everyone outstanding as well as distinctive. We have no reason to suspect significant values which are performed by ideals. We are entitled to pursue our ideals that will make us become whoever we expect to be. Especially in modern times, benefitting from the advanced science and technology plus comfortable living conditions which our parents take pains to create for us, we can be better to make use of all the resources whether they are belonged to materials or spirit sorts to realize our dreams. Internationally, the main two subjects, namely, the peace and development that all the worldwide people are advocating, also provide us with opportunities to go abroad. Those excellent merits broaden our horizons and bring about chances to understand our brilliances and ideals. Since ideals are not classified into noble and humble kinds, as long as making up your mind and selecting what is suitable for you, you can make great accomplishments sooner or later. It is up to you to be a scholar, a scientist, a writer, a blacksmith and even a worker. Much as plenty of people may laugh at you when you are facing with defeats, what you need to do is to despise them and insist on your pursuits. Although we can not deprive of their privileges of mocking, we have potential and confidence in succeeding. The more times we fail, the more chance we succeed. As most successful persons turn out, scarcely had they achieved their ideals than they initially made attempts. We are aspired to get rid of obstacles when trapped in troubles and stand on the peak in the world. That people are yearning for becoming giants is to observe the world with new views instead of won fortunes and reputations. The idiom, swine may fly onto sky, is ridiculous in the passing time, by now, has been endowed new concepts, that is nothing is impossible.
