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2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:50浏览次数:4562
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题目 The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition.
2.the topic is "The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication"
3.You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分85.0分
评语:

过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;作者句法很棒,合理使用了复杂句;作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活。

用户练习作文:

The impact of internet on interpersonal communication With the development of the internet,more and more people prefer to chat on line rather than communicate face to face because they feel at home when they speak with their invisible friends,which has led to a lot of problems to their health. In the first place,it is no benefit to make friends on line.Most people are not willing to talk with their friends because they argue that they can make friends on line that do not need to pay much attention to their wording.So the more they escape,the more they shy.In the second place,here are all kinds of people on line and some people who always talk something dirty to mislead students who can not identify love and sex.It is the way they communicate that cause some mental problems to juniors.Last but not least,chatting on line will decline our writing ability,in that we do not need to write words when we talk,so there is no doubt that chatting on line are harmful to us . From the foremost,we know that we should balance the relationship between the internet and our real life and I insist that we will benefit a lot in the end.

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