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With the development of social,more and more people like to shopping online in daily day.Once people need to buy something,they will think about online shopping at once.Therefore,online shopping had been a fashion. In life,online shopping can't take too much time to buy goods.And then,you have a lot of kinds goods to select.As the saying goes:every coins have two sides,online shopping has its weakness.Such as the merchants who have a bad character will break their promise that send something bad to customer or refused to return.There is a derived problems that losgistics personnel possibily break the goods during sending. As far as I'm concernd,we can buy something cheap online rather than expensive.Secondly,the government strengthen the rules about merchants in case the customer lost their interesting.The last but not list,we should form good habits of honesty.
