2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

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the way to success what is meaning of success?for students ,success is acquired many award ;for common workers ,success is promote a position in their company;for businessman ,the success is get more and more money;for writers,the success is create a great article or essay and so on.diffirent man have diffrent viewpoint for success. but the way to success is unique:insist on work hard ,and keep on all the time,this is the most crucial.and second keeping study,because we live in a developing world.if you couldn't catch up with the velocity of this world,you were to be abandoned by the world.third,health is basis.if no health body, all things are junk.so do sports every day for our wealth. go!go!go!is success.