小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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Xiaofang,a friend of mine,a girl who was outgoing.And she got along well with all our classmates.Indeed,she was very kind because she always help someone who meet the difficulties.What's more,she oftens do some housework after class because she want to help her mother.As far as I am concerned,I like xiao fang very much as well as she is worth receiving our respect.