2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；作者词汇表达较丰富，但请仔细检查词汇的拼写；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

In recent years, computers have been more and more important in our daily life. Computers can work as the brain of people and are more efficient and accurate. Nowadays, without computers people nearly can't live a normal life. The creation of the computer have totally changed the way of our life, and taken lots of advantages to us as well. There's no doulbt that the development of technology must contribute to the human's sociaty. In the field of science, people can solve extream complex problems with computer, which will take hundreds of years to solve by man. In government, civil servents can use computer to manage the large quantity of dates, which would be taken lots of spaces to store by papers in the past. Of cource, the technology of computer just has its disadvantages. Nowadays, more and more people use computer to cheat money or to get dates from others' computers. So people should take actions to prevent these things from developing, make the environment of Internet and computers more clear. And we should be more careful when we use computers as well. In a word, computers really take lots of convinience to us, but everything does have its disadvantage. When people try their best to develop the technologies, we should pay attentions to that whether we use them in approperate ways. As long as we do so, we'll really enjoy the advantages of the technologies.