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2013年5月16日雅思大作文真题:广告的副作用

发布时间:2013-08-07 15:42浏览次数:1778
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Advertising which can be seen everywhere in daily life influences what people think is important and has negative effects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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用词灵活多样,也能较灵活地使用一些学术词汇;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;全文结构较为严谨。

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Nowadays, as the competitions between companies becoming more and more fierce, both the quality and quantity of advertisements have been risen. As a result, anywhere in our daily life, including online, on the newspaper, on magazines or outdoors, we can find various of advertisements. Undoubtedly, sometimes, advertisements are not only tools to attract consumers but can also be work of art that can decorate our life and bring us joy. some people even said that the entertainments are more interesting than the Tv show that they interrupted. However, on the other hand, we may be influenced by advertisements unconsciously. Advertisements influence our choices of goods and also influence our style of life, some of which are positive but some of which are negative. Follows are some examples about its negative examples. First, sometimes, advertisements will send fate information to consumers. Some of them will exaggerate the use of the goods while others may hide the side effects of the product. And due to this lies, the prices of the products become higher and lots of consumers were disappointed. Second, advertisements will simulate people to waste money on something they don't really need. Finally, it was too late for most of the consumers to regret when they found the product was superfluous. Thirdly, some advertisements use sentences with grammatical error to catch intention. Children who are still learning languages may be mislead by them. In conclusion, advertisements plays a vital role in our life nowadays. They can provide us lot of joys and information about the latest goods. Nerveless, the negative aspects about advertisements should not be ignored. Companies should shoulder the responsibility to help building a harmony and healthy community, which means they should upgrade the level of advertisements and be ensure the contains are true and healthy.

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