2009全国中考英语试题汇编试题(55)写作:雾霾天气（haze weather)

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Recently, our country many northern city has a haze weather (haze weather, it gives people the life brings a lot of inconvenience. Would you please talk about the haze weather to the impact of people's lives, and puts forward some suggestions on how to reduce haze weather.Recently, our country many northern city has a haze weather (haze weather, it gives people the life brings a lot of inconvenience. Would you please talk about the haze weather to the impact of people's lives, and puts forward some suggestions on how to reduce haze weather.