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2004年1月英语六级作文真题:浪费现象

发布时间:2013-05-14 22:36浏览次数:1942
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Reduce Waste on Campus. You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese. 

1.有些大学校园浪费现象日益严重 

2.浪费的危害

3.杜绝浪费, 从我做起 

用户的作文(系统评分71.0分
评语:

拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳;句法知识不错,多多加强复杂句的练习。

用户练习作文:

The Waste on Campus Now days,the waste on campus has become a common part of people' life.And the waste has always aroused the greatest concern.What impresses us most is the waste on campus. The reasons of waste on campus are varied. Among the various reasons,the quality of the college students play an important role.That is to say,the college students' quality isn't enough yet,even they get more and more knowledge that is in the book.What is more,the level of the college students' life is much higher than the past few years.For example,the college students can get enough money from their family or take a pare time job. When talking about the waste on campus.On the one hand,the waste is a immoral behavior.In the other hand,we should respect the working people.In brief,we should start small to reduce the waste.

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