雅思写作范文:出国旅游的利弊

文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；有效地采用了一些简单的从句为文章增色；学术词汇需要继续积累，单词拼写不错。

With the development of the science and technology in transportation field, traveling around becomes easier and easier for people nowadays, especially traveling abroad. The most favored traveling destinations include America, European country, Asian countries like China and Japan. Traveling abroad not only broadens people's horizon and adds more color to people's life but also narrows down the distance between people from different countries and cultivate the mutual relationship and understanding between them. However, there are also some bad effects bring by traveling abroad, that is while some people travel abroad, they may damage the famous tourist sites sometime out of impolite behavior, also some people may litter in the tourist sites which will worse the environment. Traveling abroad is beneficial for people who want to broaden the horizon but enjoy a more colorful life cause they can see the world outside of their countries and meet different people from other countries, it's a kind of new experience. Meanwhile, people traveling abroad can get to know people and what their life are in other countries, get to know the different culture and customs, they can also make friends with the local people as well if they get on well with each other. Nevertheless, traveling abroad has two bad effects if some people behave badly. Generally speaking, one is when some people travel abroad, they like to have their signature marked on the tourist sites as a mark of they been there before or to keep track of their deeply love or friendship, which is favored by most of people not me. But this kind of behavior has caused the damage to the tourist sites whether some people realize it or not and also set a bad example for the following tourists. The other one is some people are used to littering on the tourist sites, which will cause damage to the environment there and leave an bad impression for the local people, not to mention the inconvenience bring to the tourism cleaner. Therefore, when people travel abroad, i hope they can be polite and clean tourists while they enjoy their leisure time abroad with their families or friends, in this way can we build a beautiful and clean tourism world.