题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升,学术词汇使用过少;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;全文结构较为严谨;请注意分段。
At present,computer plays a more and more important part of our daily life.Men seem to be addicted to the Internet. People usually use of computer to do what personal want to do.such as, play compter games,watch movies, listen to music and chat online,and so on.Although computer si very useful, spending and wasting many times on it.