2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

文中学术词汇使用比较准确，但文中拼写错误稍多；可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨。

On maintaining trust is of great importance to us. To start with, with the accelerating pace of our society ,more and more persons keep less in touch with each other. Furthermore, due to popularity of internet , increasing people are diclined to share joy with virtual person in internet. Secondly, it is highly necessary for us to maintaining trust nowadays. As an illustration, maintaining trust is benificial to promoting interaction within company so as to enhance staffs' performance .