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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17572
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分66.5分
评语:

有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分;句式变化较为明显,句法基础不错;作者学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间,词汇表达灵活性也要提高,单词拼写错误较多;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

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snap judgement can never be trusted Nowadays,the phenomenon has brought into focus on whether snap judgement can never be trusted or not. As far as i am concerned, i take possitive attitude to snap judgement can never be trusted. To start with,persons who can make a descision out of considerated. Actually,snap judgement plays an negtive role in making desicision. According to the report of New York Times, it's said that more than 50% desicions have beem made because of snap judgement. That is to say,as a manufacturer,bussiness declining ascribe to the snap judgement.As the saying goes:considerating more before you do. Secondly, according to the science survey by Harford professor, it's said that human being is out of mentalism during the negtive condition. So as to get rid of making unfavorable decision, it's better for us to calm down when you are annoy.

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