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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第10篇:政府的资金应多投资于艺术而不是运动项目

发布时间:2013-08-08 17:42浏览次数:1855
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Governments should spend more money supporting the arts than supporting athletics such as an Olympic team.

政府的资金应多投资于艺术而不是运动项目。不同的人持有不同的看法。

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学术词汇能比较准确的使用,不过拼写错误稍多;文中应增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;行为稍欠流畅,过渡词用的还可以。

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Recently, a hot debate has been discussed about whether governments should spend more money supporting the arts than supporting athletics such as an Olympic team. To be frank, i take an positive attitude to government should spend more money supporting the arts . It is acknowledged that China is a coutry who has five thousand years of history. It is no doubt that we should put the emphasis on enhancing the arts. Indeed,culture is the demonstration of comprehesive power of a country. Neverthless,China has the obligation to build up the arts so as to transmit chinese culture . however,athletics such as an olympic team ,should not taken into consideratin .

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