2009年12月英语四级作文真题:建设绿色校园

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Creating a green campus is a very important thing.Campus belongs the young boys and girls who study here,they need a healthy place,green,peace. Green campus is not only a green nature,but also healthy,peace,positive and so on. For a green campus ,first we need green trees with leaves on them,and then a clean schoolyard.Of course,the most important ,we need happy,healthy,positive students and teachers. This purpose needs everyone's efforts,we must build a beautful environment for our youths,for they are our hopeness.