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my opinion on certificate craze for every the graduates,getting certificate is so important.especially to live in modern society.it is cruel in this world what hotly competition.however,many people only acknowledege the diploma.they think the credentials is more important than ablity. my point to the certificate ,sure,the credentials is very important.we could not deny its work.for company,they can't know your true strength,so only check your credentials to understand your ability indirectly.it helps enterprise to know that aplier if he have seek knowlege,curioty,ambitious and so worth.