2002年12月英语四级作文真题:诚实利人利己

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we all know,there are many unhonesty situation in the society at present.for example:students ask their parents for money for a unreasonable reason,besides,we maybe treated by all kinds of ads ,because they are always different from what advertasters described. And so on. however,the fact is that :honest are advantage to not only ourselves but also others .so,whatever we do we should to be honest,only in this way can we have a better life.