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As it is known to us , disposal bags are wild-used in the past years. However,the phenomena of wildly using disposal bags should be changed,thought by most people.Take the pollution of disposal bags caused into account,it's easy to accept the limitation.First,plastic is very difficult to brock down,and will stay long time.Second,disposal bag can seperate the water in deep soil and surface soil that caused the soil become poor.Last,it containing a lot of toxins is harmful to our heath. According to all above,limiting the use of disposal bags is meaningful and rewarding.Only in this way,can we solve the problems that disposal bags bring to us.