2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；行为稍欠流畅，过渡词用的还可以。

With the development of technology,the online shopping has become a fashion style and it become more and more popular among person especially younger nowadays .It takes us many advantages but at the same time it also make some troubles. As we know,shopping online is convenience and it can save much time for us.We have many choices on the internet before buying a goods.And without going out on bad weather but in the indoor room.However,every coin has two sides.Shopping online cause some troubles.On the one hand,we may leak our information on the internet and it will not safe.On the other hand,the goods what we buy may have the quality questions or not what we really want to buy. As far as I am concerned,shopping online more harm than good.Be cautious when shopping on line.