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With the increasing devolopment in people's life, more and more families choose to have only one child,in that case,parents are often used to get everything done for thier children.But it does not do good to kids,on the contrary,it is harm for them.So it is time for parents to let their kids become independent. For one things,adults ought to make children form a idea that they shoud do everything on thier own when they are young,in order to achieve this,parents should teach kids do things,such as,washing clothes,cleaning the house ......rather than do these well for them.For another things,parents should hid thier kind-heart,espacially for mother,parents ought to believe that thier children can make it at last instead of being worried about what if kids hurt themselves or fail.No one borns with success,only parents support children do everything by themselves can they attain success. Parents help children to be independent not only benefit children but the society,so,why not let children fly with freedom?
