过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;有效地采用了一些简单的从句为文章增色;文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了。
In these years, it is very popular for many apparatuses to make the ranking of university in Chinese, also in the world. There are some different sounds about it. Some people approve with these university ranking as they think it is clear to reveal the strength of different university, so it will be a important reference when they make some choice like their kids select the appropriate university after graduated from high school. while some people believe that these ranking thing maybe a little bit lopsided which could not show the whole strength of a university, so it maybe misleading sometime. in my opinion, if these university ranking show much more detail, like their rules to make the ranking, it will be a huge help for us to make some choice.
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