2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；有效地采用了一些简单的从句为文章增色；作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达，但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；请注意分段。

There is a saying goes; the more education you get , the higher you will get,but sometimes, that is not right. According to the Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey,the number of people who get doctoral degree could obtain a high salary is just 2.5%, as you can see, which is equal to the professional degree's.The master's just 1.3% lower than the bachelor's, the number of people who get less than high school diploma is the highest of the last four.Yes, the average of unemployment rate in 2011 is 7.6%,that is to say, the most persons could have a job to do, but the average salary just is $797, a little lower, you know.