题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
词汇表达不够丰富,要增加学术词汇的使用;若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用,文章会更棒;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。
In our life,we have family members,friends and lovers.What is the most important between us? It is trust.And how can we maintain the trust? First,we must trust other persons, It is basical!If we do not believe them,they would be same! Second,We do everything by our heart,and,it is true.That is to say,we can not lie to our friends and relatives.The least but not the last,It had better say the everything to our friends, make them feel we are sincere. Friendship is so important that everything can displace it, And,the most significant thing is believing! Let us trust and maintain the trust.