2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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minerals,metallic materials,hardware,furniture and interior decorative materials; Leasing equipments of onstruction machinery;Planting some vegetables and garden crop, Real Estate Development and Management and Housing demolition; Land development and management.( The business are involved special approval to state laws, administrative rules and regulations, in accordance with the approval of the project and time limit to carry out business activities.)