Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;句式灵活多变,再加强从句的使用会更棒;拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;请注意分段;连词使用偏少。
The human race has entered a completely new stage in its history,with the increasingly rapid economic globalization and urbanization ,more problems are brought to our attention.earning and education play such an important role that it undeniably becomes the biggest concern of the present world,lower unemployment rates the education pays don't higher earnings more,higher earnings easy give good school and job.