2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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Investing textile industry, leasing industry, Commercial Service经营范围 Industry.Organizing foreign economic,trade exhibition and technical exchange activities;Handle advertising specialt, Exhibiting the equipment of import and export practices and the duty payer purchase about the exhibit in China,Designing,Making and Acting for different advertising service, interior decoration, decorative designs; Art exhibition services; Management consulting; Wholesale and retail trade(except countries specialize in exclusive control of goods); 4493 Passbook of Time Deposit/Lump-sum Time Deposit—Refer Account Master Files