小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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my goodfriend My goodfriend is ChenJiayun. She is short, he has a long hair. She is a smart .She like go shopping. She like summer best, because she can swim in the sea. She get up at seven. Whaout good friend, is she has a long hair, she like summer too?