2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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nowadays.computer play a great role in my life.what pepole want to stay at home instead of go outside .for example ,humans working,learning and shopping along with development . every coin has two sides,pepole can save much time to do anything they nwant,however,pepole waste the numbers of time on computer ,much more time and less acquaint among friends ,