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my view on university on ranking there are a varity of university on ranking in china.such as all specialized subject rank,medical college rank,ii engineer rank,accountant subject rank and so forth.and it would college discriminate excellent for example "985"and "211"key university,the remainant schools are worse. in our traditional china,the citizens are very think highly of the educatinal background of students.whatever college,high school ,even primary school.most people think that students from famous college is more outstanding than the second university.famous college is equal to number one scholar in our heart. yes,i think the educational background is important,because enterprise would know you only by these certificates except first expressions.but it couldn't stand up your practice as same as your theroitical,and it only represent your past,not now,even future.
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