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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17423
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分82.0分
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拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。

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social practice has been more and more popular in universities and colleges . students are asked to enter society and get some idea of it . surely social practice has many advantages . firstly, social practice can offer students a chance to contact society and gain some valuable social experience , which will be useful to their future career . secondly , students can apply what they have learned in class to practical work ,thus knowing themselves more clearly . thirdly, social practice can bring them some financial reward and make them more independent of their family. however,some problems may arise if no correct guidance is made. for example , some students get overly interested in social practice and want to work full-time and earn money, thus neglecting their studies. and some students are likely to get in touch with the dark side of society ,which will affect their future studies . in order to carry out social practice smoothly ,students should first know its objective.they should put their studies in the first place and see social practice just as a useful supplement ,so they ought to try to strike a balance between social practice and their studies.

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