题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。
Social practice has been more and more popular in school. students are asked to enter society and get some idea of it . Surely social practice has many advantages . Firstly, social practice can offer students a chance to contact society and gain some valuable social experience , which will be useful to their future career . Secondly , students can apply what they have learned in class to practical work ,thus knowing themselves more clearly . Thirdly, social practice can bring them some financial reward and make them more independent of their family. However,some problems may arise if no correct guidance is made. For example , some students get overly interested in social practice and want to work full-time and earn money, thus neglecting their studies. And some students are likely to get in touch with the dark side of society ,which will affect their future studies . In order to carry out social practice smoothly ,students should first know its objective.They should put their studies in the first place and see social practice just as a useful supplement ,so they ought to try to strike a balance between social practice and their studies.