2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

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The human race has entered a completely new stage in its history,with the increasingly repaid economic globalization and urbanization,more problems are brought to our attention.As to whether it is on excessive packaging,there is a long-running controversial debate.It is quite natural that people from different backgrounds may have divergent attitudes towards it. Some people are of the opinion that stores should on excessive packaging,because now we are entering a new era.but other people regard shouldn't on excessive packaging,because it is took advantage of the customer on excessive packaging.Personally,I side with the latter opinion.