题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;上下文衔接稍显不流畅。
Recently,social practice has been more and more popular in school.Students are asked to enter society and get some idea of it. Surely social practice has many advantages.Firstly,social practice can offer students a chance to contact society and gain some valuable social experience.Secondly,students can apply what they have learned in class to practical work,thus knowing themselves more clearly.Thirdly,social practice can bring them some financial reward and make them more independent of their family. However,some problems may arise.For example, some students get overly interested in social practice and want to work full-time and earn money,thus neglecting their studies.And some students are likely to get in touch with the dark side of society,which will affect their future studies. In order to carry out social practice smoothly,students should first know its objective.They should put their studies in the first place and see social practice just as a useful supplement,so they ought to try to strike a balance between social practice and their studies.