文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;上下文衔接手法不熟练,没有能够有效的使用衔接词;采用了一些简单的从句;请注意分段。
Dear John, Thanke you for inviting me, but I'm sorry I can't have a meal at your home.These days,I'm studying for an important exam in tomorrow after tomorrow.So I have to stay at home to read some books.After I finishing my exam,I will call you.Then will you invite me to your home? I hope you can have a wonderful time,maybe you should call someone else to have a dinner with you,right? And thank you again. Yours, Lihua