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as time went by, we finally graduated. as your best friend,I have something important to say.TO begin with, you are an warm-hearted boy,and you are always aidding me when I am in trouble.Second,do you remember you ever saved my sister's life.My sister faliing off the bike ,it was you who loaded her to the hospital. last but not least ,I will appreciate it if you accept my sincere invitation . may you learn better and live better