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2010年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(23):态度决定一切

发布时间:2013-09-18 15:18浏览次数:1349
要求:
Some years ago, leaving the farm to work in the city, three brothers were employed by the same company and on the same pay. But three years later, they received different wages. So their father was confused and decided to pay a visit to the boss, who told him that he would let his sons explain for themselves.
The three brothers were asked by the supervisor to go to the airport to get a cargo inventory at different times. Jim, who received 500 dollars a month, got the information on the phone instead of going to the airport himself. Frank, the 1000 dollars a month brother with a list of more cargoes. George, the 1500 dollars a month brother came back with detailed information and also did something extra without being told.
[写作内容]
1.概括该故事的内容要点,该部分的字数大约30词左右;
2.就“态度决定一切”这个主题发表你的看法,至少包含以下的内容要点,该部分的字数大约120词左右。
1)你认为是什么导致三兄弟的薪酬差异;
2)你从这个故事得到什么启示;
3)你对 “态度决定一切”如何理解?
4)举一对比事例说明不同的学习态度产生不同的结果。
[写作要求]
你可以使用实例可其他论述方法支持你的论点,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不要抄袭阅读材料中的句子。 
用户的作文(系统评分82.5分
评语:

文中词汇表达灵活多样,也能较好的使用部分学术词汇;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

There are three brothers employed by same company earns different wages on account of their work attitude,ranged from lazy to conscientious,which makes their father so confused. It is no denying that attitude is essential to everything.From the above-mentioned story,we can learn why the wages of three brothers earn differently. We can easily discern the difference among it.It's absolutely up to whether they take it seriously or not. From the story,I know better that no matter what we may encounter big or trivial thing,I should do our best to make it.In this way,there will unexpected surprise before me. Take a example,two swimmers compete for a position that can participate an upcoming game,one is talent but lazy,the other is ordinary but down-to-earth.Though the former take advantage of the later,their coach decide to pick up the later.It is obvious and confirmed that attitude is a crucial factor.

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