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学术词汇需要继续积累，单词拼写不错；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。
Three brothers, who worked for the same company, received different wages due to their different attitudes towards their work, which shows right attitude is of great help to one's life. Their different attitudes towards their work result in their different wages. From the story I can conclude that those who take positive attitude towards work will be rewarded. Different attitudes lead to different results. Take Xiao Hua as an example. He is my classmate. Not only does he put his heart into study but he is also helpful both to teachers and students. So he has become a top student in our class, even in the grade. With his diligence and concentration, he is bound to succeed in entering his ideal university. However, Xiao Li, also my classmate, never cares about his study because he is addicted to playing games; he turns a deaf ear to the teachers' advice. As a result, he falls far behind others in his study. In my opinion, attitude is everything. No matter what you do, you must do it well even if you may fail many times. Sooner or later you will be rewarded for your positive attitude towards your work or life.
