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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:58浏览次数:6290
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题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任

字数:150满分:100分

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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;文章上下文衔接不是很紧凑,结构缺少组织。

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What's the basic and important element in a real friendship? The answer absolutely is trust.You can got a hand from your partner only you trust him.The attitude to the relationship just like a mirror that they may treat the relationship like you. And the consequences of a wonderful friendship depended on your sincere attitude to your friendship. Nowadays someone,who always think they were cleverer than others. want to get something from their friends maybe hurt their peers. I think it is a foolish way to treat relationship with friends like that. There is no stupid person treat you as a real friend that you always hurt him in the world. Everyone like a honest and kindhearted person and they will choose them to their honey partners. In my opinion, just maintaining trust can make a miracle friendship.Keep it you will enjoy your perfect lives.We can't do anything if we don't have a peer around us.

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