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福建福州十五中2012-2013学年八年级下学期月考试卷英语作文

发布时间:2013-05-15 17:44浏览次数:1543
要求:
根据中文意思和英文提示以Working Hard and Keeping Fit为题写一篇80个词左右的短文。
中文提示:现在的中学生,学习压力很大,于是只顾学习,而忽视了体育锻炼,致使身体处于亚健康状态。陈华就是一个例子。他正读初中,一场大病后,他明白了健康的重要性。现在除了刻苦学习外,他还积极参加各种课外体育活动。英文提示:1 used to,.stay up late at night
2.take part in sports, activities
3.fall ill, study hard
4.exercise, in good health
5.keep fit
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文章词汇表达比较灵活,学术词汇的使用要继续加强;句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富,层次欠清晰。

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Working Hard and Keeping Fit Chen Hua is a junior student.He used to stay up late at night to study.He seldom took part in sports or other activities.When his classmates were playing on the playground during break time, he was often studying at his desk. He believed his studies were more important than anything else.At last he fell seriously ill.He had to stay in bed for a long time. Now Wang Hua knows the importance of good health. He exercises every day and often takes an active part in all kinds of outdoor activities.He's now in good health. A good student should work hard at his lessons and know how to keep fit.

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