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Syndicate members created Facebook accounts of young, attractive - but entirely fictitious - women to entice victims from around the world to strike up conversations with them, before sending them pornographic material. They would then secretly record the victims after tricking them into exposing their bodies or having cybersex, and later threaten to send the videos to friends and relatives unless they paid amounts usually ranging between US$500 and US$2,000. Hong Kong police inspector Louis Kwan Chung-yin said more than 470 people from Hong Kong were blackmailed last year and about 160 so far this year. In one case, a victim paid the equivalent of US$15,000, he said, adding that the victims were of various ages. Philippines police arrested at least 58 Filipino suspects in Manila and other cities in the country after investigators from Interpol, the United States’ Homeland Security Department and other police agencies traced online chats from a number of the victims’ computers, said Philippine National Police chief Alan Purisima today.