2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，学术词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查。

As the picture shown that the father ask her daughter how was school ,she make teh father to her blog .in fact .it's easy to reply on her father 's question ,directly .in addition ,she make the thing s upset .we can get the internet sink into our daily life .even our speaking life . The computer is a most great inviton on my life .however ,a considerale number of problem turn up along with the universal of internet . such as people prefer to write on the internet insteadly inform others ,but we spent more time on virtual world .but not in reality ,there are less time to playing with our friends on park and garden and animal home.