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As the technology developing,the computer is completely different from those many years ago.Therefore,it's natural to think about the Internet,which is the most important part in computer industries. We all know that the Internet is changing our lifestyes such as the way we entertaining,the way we searching information and so on.However,what I want to stress is the change of communication.It's no doubt that the Internet make us more convinient to chat with each other.It breaks the geographic barrier built by nature.We can find a person,who is in long distance with us,and have a talk with him or her easily through the Internet. Nonetheless,the Internet creats another problem for our communication,which is the interpesonal gulf between people.Due to lack of talk face to face,the human's relationship is becoming more and more fragile.Some people even sink into the Internet,the imaginary world.As time goes,they are not accustomed to communicate in the real world.That's terrible thing we all don't want to see.Accordingly,we should not rely on the Internet,so we can have a stable and sincere social interperson.
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