拼写方面做得很棒,平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。
As the technology developing,the computer is completely different from those many years ago.Therefore,it's natural to think about the Internet,which is the most important part in computer industries. We all know that the Internet speeds up our world and keep changing our lifestyles by providing fantastic tools.However,what I want to stress is the change of communication.It's no doubt that the Internet make us more convenient to chat with each other.The geographic barrier built by nature is overcomed because of the Internet.We can easily contact with a person who is in the distance.What's more,a vedio talk is not impossible due to the existence of the Internet. Nonetheless,the Internet creates another problem for our communication,which is the mental barriers between people.Due to lack of talk face to face,the human's relationship is becoming more and more fragile.Some people even sink into the Internet,the imaginary world.As time goes,they are not accustomed to communicate in the real world.That's terrible thing we all don't want to see.Accordingly,we should not rely on the Internet,so we can have a stable and sincere social interpersonal relationship.
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