题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
词汇表达灵活多样请继续保持,不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。
Classic for young people, more and more strange. Nowadays, many classics are lost. Generally speaking, the classics are necessary and important but backward. Different people have different opinions. On the one hand, some people think that some classic is obsolete, no longer the fresh things, so they stopped to read and pay attention to them. On the other hand, some people think that the classic is classic, because they stand the test of time, and they represent the wisdom of the past. Therefore, no matter in which era, we should treasure them and continue to go down, our generation is no exception. Classics in our view are out of style and boring. However, when you really clam down and think about it, now the people are too impetuous, can't calm down to experience carefully understand one thing.In classic idea has not read, they are immersed in the flashy things, satisfied with just a temporary pleasure and ignore the themselves in the cultivation of spirit. In my opinion, we live with increasingly weather's around us, all the time does not exist the temptation of one kind or another, they entice us step by step in the abyss of unable to since the dial, kill our will and spirit. So, let us practice iron will, do our best to resist the temptation of around you. I think, some of theclassic masterpieces and film and television as a choice of our discipline. We would like to think our predecessors left by the spiritual feast for us, let us can not only enjoy in material, also let us the spirit of the world got the sublimation. As a student, what we learn is classic, which passed down form one generation to generation. F or example, know more about histories and cultures can improve our life and enjoy ourselves. Besides, the improved living standard enables people to pursue and enjoy more choices of entertainments including the adaptations of the classics. However, the classics represents the past and our society are developing all time. We should need much new cultures, technologies and ideas, which can benefit our humans to living and developing. So, we should treat it correctly. Let the classics be classics. We are developing forward!