题目 Should parents send their kids to art classes?
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should parents send their kids to art class? it is popular to send children to art class in city.i want to if there are enough economy conditions in country,these parents will do it.why?first,in most father and mother's eyes,studying music and dancing could develop their children's disposition,and make them more excellent.other hand,learning art could add scores in college entrance examination,i think it very important for chinese. similarily,i believe some people wouldn't agree it.because study art would wast much more time and money.and other people think their children un-like attend to the art class. there is some truth on both sides.but in my viewpoint,learning art may broad their own intersts rather than only study in class,it could make friends with the same tasts.and it would provide more chance to find work.
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