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题目要求：
Advertising discourages people from being different individuals by making us all want to do the same and look the same. Do you agree or disagree?
题目讲解：
题义理解上有那么一点难！但是总之都跟广告有关。
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I Disagree with this topic which advertising discourages people being different individuals. Because i think the individual should have ability to evaluate things whether right or wrong. In another hand, people would have a sense of knowing the product that advertise is bad or good. Obviously, they don't look the same. Each people have different view, and they give comments if after they have used it.
